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Tijesunimi_Olalusi

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    Tijesunimi_Olalusi16d ago
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    This novel had a genuinely good concept and somehow wasted all of it. A wolf MC in Naruto with survival, evolution, and beast clan politics could’ve been amazing. Instead it became another generic “system gives MC everything” power fantasy. No tension. No real struggle. No character depth. Every chapter is basically: “Ding! Reward!” “Everyone shocked!” “MC becomes stronger again!” At some point it stops feeling like Naruto and starts feeling like a random cultivation novel wearing a Naruto skin. The pacing is terrible, the dialogue feels robotic, and nothing feels earned because the system keeps carrying the MC every five seconds. This isn’t storytelling. It’s just dopamine farming. 1/10 for the wasted potential.

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    Tijesunimi_Olalusi6 months ago
    Posted

    Pure shit. The MC keeps saying he “can’t save people from the show,” yet he still runs around saving random nobodies. Why follow the cast like a loyal sidekick instead of thinking for yourself? With wishes and powers, he still acts like a background extra. And the constant crying over people dying? This is an apocalypse people die, you can’t save everybody. The MC is unrealistic, weak-minded, and absolutely not built for this world.

  • Tijesunimi_Olalusi
    Tijesunimi_Olalusia year ago
    Posted

    This has to be the dumbest novel I’ve ever read. Like seriously, bro was out here claiming he could defeat The One Above All just because he’s Doomsday. If that’s true, then why hasn’t Doomsday ever defeated The Presence? Saying nonsense like, “If The One Above All kills him, he’d just come back stronger.” Are you kidding me? More like you’d get erased from existence entirely. Dumb, arrogant MC acting like he’s unbeatable when he’s not even that strong. Just because you stayed in the sun for a hundred thousand years doesn’t make you invincible it just proves you only watch Marvel movies, not read the actual comics.

    This book has been deleted.
  • Tijesunimi_Olalusi
    Tijesunimi_Olalusia year ago
    Posted

    this is one of the best novel I have ever read [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

  • Tijesunimi_Olalusi
    Tijesunimi_Olalusi2 years ago
    Commented

    can't wait for the next chapter

  • Tijesunimi_Olalusi
    Tijesunimi_Olalusi2 years ago
    Commented

    thank you for another beautiful chapter 🥰🥰