Oh, and I believe you could expand the chapters further since they are really short. Just my opinion though, it is easy to read but pulls me out of immersion really fast.

I see quite the potential for this book, so far it has been what I have expected, not that my expectations are bad but it hasn't been very unique or special yet. Although I still enjoyed reading since I myself would also love a personal statistics screen. But either way, I like the writing style and the world the most here. Goodluck!

As the writer of this novel I am writing this totally unbiased review of 'Hominota'. But this is my first ever public work, and I believe I've been doing a good job at it, the writing is seamless, updating is usually daily except for a few days where I may have occassions. I'm developing the story at an entertaining pace and I think each of my characters are well developed. The world background is interesting to say the least and I will look forward to exploring further with you all. Thanks for reading, guys. And I will also publish this work elsewhere once complete.

I can't lie, the reading is pretty smooth when it comes to this style of writing. Sometimes too long but still readable. Appreciate the bi-daily updates, since I'm bored a lot. Definitely has potential, and the names are cool.