SNoupela

Look, you're doing great. Good writing and interesting flow. The story up to the current chapter hasn't revealed much about the protagonist and the antagonist yet but I already see many hooks for a promising future. MC seems intelligent and has knowledge about the world of Skyrim, but at the same time behaves in a realistic manner. I've liked it so far, and I'm eager to know who the romance will be and the future of the plot, which already seems to be taking shape