An intriguing and dynamic start for sure. The premise is unique and complex, but the plot so far seems to be rather turbulent and erratic. I'm sure this will improve in coming chapters, but it makes for an engaging start. The characters are nothing notable so far, but the story is still in its infancy. I don't find the MC particularly engaging, but I feel this is more personal preference than immutable fact. A promising start to say the least, looking forward to the direction you take this.

Interesting dynamic