
The most dangerous person around, that is, if he’s the only person in the room. - any remaining novels i have are massively outdated, and do not demonstrate a fourth of my current writing capability
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Second half is unnecessary social commentary why the hell does my narrator have personality
Pretty sure most webnovel readers are virgins through and through
Yea what are you even doing author…
??? Alberto needs to watch his soldiers. What do you mean “monkeys”? Is Colonel Hans reminiscent of the Holocaust? This doesn’t make the military seem “bad-ass” just makes it less operational and more emotional
We legitimately didn’t even see her death. I’m not sure. Mixed feelings. The description is like “Holy damn she’s dead” but I am kind of lost to what may have killed her
So, let me get this. Faster than the bullet can travel (because you said he grabs it afterward) he lifts up a body and uses it as a flesh shield. Are we sure we’re not in your ideal fantasy world?
His flesh turning into dust?? So where’d you get your medical license?
It feels like you’re dehumanizing Alberto and the Empire whilst you add sadder tones to the village. They could have demonstrated their devastating ability, but instead said “Surrender or war” without any context. Of course it didn’t accept!
Unnecessary bombing, in my opinion. A few demonstrations are okay, but bombs will utterly devastate the civilian population too.
confirmation sotnik = superhuman durability