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The most dangerous person around, that is, if he’s the only person in the room. - any remaining novels i have are massively outdated, and do not demonstrate a fourth of my current writing capability

2024-02-02 JoinedAscension Island

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lifesource2 months ago
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Second half is unnecessary social commentary why the hell does my narrator have personality
Everything he had done so far was due to his own determination as a young man to further his ambition. Sometimes, people forget that simple ambition could be enough to drive a person forward and not manufactured threats or enemies.
I am the God of Technology
Sci-fi · Kotario
lifesource3 months ago
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Pretty sure most webnovel readers are virgins through and through
To give the roughest and rawest analogy, it was like the difference between having sex with a condom and doing it raw. He had gone from using a condom to raw, and he could feel the subtle differences.
I am the God of Technology
Sci-fi · Kotario
lifesource4 months ago
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Yea what are you even doing author…
"How dare you! Fucking Monkeys!"
Reincarnated with the Country System
War · Blackcovra
lifesource4 months ago
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??? Alberto needs to watch his soldiers. What do you mean “monkeys”? Is Colonel Hans reminiscent of the Holocaust? This doesn’t make the military seem “bad-ass” just makes it less operational and more emotional
A surge of anger, born of pain and humiliation, coursed through him. He clenched his fists, his face contorting with fury. "How dare these stupid monkeys hurt me!" he roared.
Reincarnated with the Country System
War · Blackcovra
lifesource4 months ago
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We legitimately didn’t even see her death. I’m not sure. Mixed feelings. The description is like “Holy damn she’s dead” but I am kind of lost to what may have killed her
Mika's head is shattered and the Therizinosaurus' body has several small holes. From which blood is coming out.
Reincarnated with the Country System
War · Blackcovra
lifesource4 months ago
Commented
So, let me get this. Faster than the bullet can travel (because you said he grabs it afterward) he lifts up a body and uses it as a flesh shield. Are we sure we’re not in your ideal fantasy world?
Astra uses the corpse of the soldier he had just slain as a shield, and quickly runs towards the two soldiers.
Reincarnated with the Country System
War · Blackcovra
lifesource4 months ago
Commented
His flesh turning into dust?? So where’d you get your medical license?
He could feel his body crumbling, his flesh turning to dust, his life force draining away as quickly as it had surged just moments ago. The world spun around him, a dizzying kaleidoscope of color and pain, and then everything went black.
Reincarnated with the Country System
War · Blackcovra
lifesource4 months ago
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It feels like you’re dehumanizing Alberto and the Empire whilst you add sadder tones to the village. They could have demonstrated their devastating ability, but instead said “Surrender or war” without any context. Of course it didn’t accept!
Timba, the leader of Kutu village, was a powerful shaman whose presence now radiated an aura of seething rage. His weathered face, etched with ancient wisdom, was now contorted by grief and fury. His eyes, deep-set and piercing, burned with a cold, consuming anger, reflecting the pain of a broken spirit. His long, white hair flowed like a silver river down his back, now stained with the blood of his people. He was a man of imposing stature, his body lean and wiry, yet his movements were sharp and erratic, driven by a primal thirst for vengeance. His heart burned with a fire hotter than any forge, fueled by the ashes of his home and his loved ones.
Reincarnated with the Country System
War · Blackcovra
lifesource4 months ago
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Unnecessary bombing, in my opinion. A few demonstrations are okay, but bombs will utterly devastate the civilian population too.
"We will change the plan," he finally declared, his voice firm, his eyes flashing with a steely glint. "First, the air force will go and bomb them, targeting their gathering points and any visible defenses. We need to create chaos and confusion among their ranks. Once we have softened them up, the infantry will advance, supported by our tanks. We will push through their defenses and take control of the village."
Reincarnated with the Country System
War · Blackcovra
lifesource7 months ago
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confirmation sotnik = superhuman durability
It was durable to the point where the wearer could even survive head on assault rifles bullets and even anti material sniper rounds. It came with a helmet that had some technological functions like comms, infrared, thermal vision, night vision, facial recognition, aim assistance, target mapping and more.
I am the God of Technology
Sci-fi · Kotario

Rise of Thaumiel

Happens that the SCP Foundation is a legitimate organization. Now, a former weeb faces obstacles as he delves into the world of anomalies as a mere site director, expanding the organization past its scientific barriers. "Stick to the script." There is no Nicholas Mitchell in the SCP Foundation, there is only Nym, a revolutionary scientist on the rise. And there will be no family or friends, the way things are going. Will he be able to preserve what he loves? Or will the interest in the SCP Foundation and its past encompass his morality? Find out today, on Rise of Thaumiel, the stick-to-the-script system fanfic, adopted with actual interesting characters and plots brewing.

lifesource · Book&Literature

5 Chs

Warlord - Another Universe

When your belief remains in God even after unplanned death, a contract that will give you another chance will appear. To relax, of course. But what happens you parasitically reincarnate as someone who barely can?

lifesource · Urban

5 Chs

Sage: The Replacements

"When God sends down his representative and they die, you think God is happy? No. He'll bring that representative down again and let that representative be the one to kill his killer." The Sage is the only being in all of history to be respected by even the Demon Lord. Even when the Sage killed the Demon Lord, the demon lord bowed before death. However, a sneaky and cheating servant of the Ancients, the original rulers of each race, has destroyed the Sage Rebirth ritual somehow, and now the world is soon to fall into havoc, impending doom climbing up a wall. But fear not, because something else is walking, and will collide with the servant. After all, even He loves revenge.

lifesource · Fantasy

6 Chs

The System's Emperor

He was unfairly killed. And what do LOSERS do? They accept defeat. But, you see, some people say they'll make Death pay. Not the concept, but the personification. So, watch as a Xianxia of another kind occurs.

lifesource · Fantasy

4 Chs

The Forbidden Magic User of Voltoran

Yami of the Kimitsu family, a family that conceals the magic of the world, has died. Although he has immense power, he is simply lending the supernatural - and can barely grasp its true potential. But after coming to another world... I think it's safe to say; The weakest in another division is the strongest in another.

lifesource · Fantasy

13 Chs

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Hello, welcome to my story!

The Cure to Magic

"Magic is a terminal illness with symptoms of arrogance and sin. I'm the one to take that suffering away, as painfully as one can."

lifesource · Fantasy

2 Chs