emmanuelabuchi432

anyway the story is a good one my only problem, is you explaining the system so early and knowing fully well that somebody is controlling the system. and please. don't let the MC be full of lost or an MC that choose to be a hero even without thinking or can save any woman that he want but can live a man to die. kind of tired of you people making men look like a simp

the MC has a younger sister again. and why did you have to explain the origin of the system so early. kind of kills everything.. the system should be more of the will of the creation or something that is above creation