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You gave Lith a male son that none of the readers care about. Just to use him as a kidnapping arc plot progressor, and finally an NTR antagonist to his own dad. You don't give male children to harem protagonists it's an unwritten golden rule. Nobody cares about him and if you write about him you have to make him seem "cool" like his dad by bedding baddies, but all baddies belong to the MC even if they will never be seen.
The problem with these FF authors giving the MC a male child is they feel the need to give the lil trashcan a harem, here he literally steals a relationship that has been building with Moka (taboo or not). NTR vibes
Bro, you can't build up relationships with these girls and the mc for multiple chapters then have them taken by another character all of a sudden. Even if it seems minor, it feels like NTR and it's a major L for almost everyone.
Boo.