It's suprisingly good. Clumsy, yeah, but still really good.

Well then, it's about time I wrote an Eastern fantasy. This is my very first try at a cultivation novel, so don't blame me if it doesn't follow the ''traditional" path of Eastern fantasies, well, I'm sure you have some questions, which I'll be glad to answer. Firstly, it's obviously a harem. Secondly, it's a different take on the weak to strong trope. And Thirdly, there is little to no romance. seriously, which woman in her right senses would fall for Zheng Li?, spread her legs, yeah, but love is a rather strong word.

Any twisted person who does not like this novel obviously doesn't have good tastes. The writing style is easy to comprehend and accentuates the story, it has a nice pacing, and the grammar is flawless. It's an almost original storyline and a piece of literary art. Never have I seen a better beginning for any work in all my days. I see this novel becoming the next big thing very soon.

not exactly, but the mc would have a few females going along with him

there isn't any serious romance. just slight teasing here and there

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well, i appreciate your honesty. but its barely 40 chapters in, the MC is going to get more powerful as the story continues and we'll all get to understand the characters better

No, why?

im not usually one to give five stars in any review, but this piece of webnovel wonder is truly exceptional! from the first chapter, I knew that the author really worked hard to create a good book. the writing style is superb, the plot is intriguing, and the story has a natural flow to it. I look forward to seeing more chapters soon!!

Just started reading this book, and I must say that it's truly amazing. The writing style is simple and easy to read and understand, all the while never failing to portray the characters perfectly. The storyline is unique and the characters are well thought of. looking forward to seeing more about Alex'

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Ok, I gotta say that this is the first book I have ever seen to mix english and french in a way that it worked. The story has a natural flow to it that just captivates readers, however the switch between first person POV and third person POV is kinda off putting a bit.

It's a good book. The author really knows how to keep readers on the edge of their seats wondering what would happen next.However, i feel like the grammar could use a bit of improvement.

The chapters are still very few, but despite that this book is still a masterpiece! the writing style is easy to read and is very understandable, the characters are relatable, and the story flows really, really smoothly. for me, these are all the qualities of an amazing work. looking forward to seeing more chapters 🤞🤞.

yeah. you are.

wait a minute...it was an actual club?!!

well that's harsh

Club? Really?!

what an intriguing first chapter.

Hehe, shame on me for giving my own book five stars. But it's fair, because this is the best book I've written yet, even if it's the only book I've written. A big shout out to my AE, ItsHashi! Without his constant sighs, I would have never attempted this book!