Vegeta_light

Your health comes first man. Thats good its always better to go to the gym with friends. Also don’t push yourself too hard in the gym, its easier to stop going back that way. Repetition are the real reason behind gains so just have fun while your there.

That just ridiculous if you actually believe that. But it’s your story, I won’t argue with you

Such an evil comment. So evil. Satan is your father

That junior doesn’t know the immensity of heaven and earth.

I think it’s good but the translation is messy. If you can straighten it a bit l, it would be way better.

You gotta update more. It’s pretty good so far. 6 chapters is too low

That’s how edge lords act

I seen so novels do this where the reward for chasing a girl or at least trying to get a friendly impression with her will make the mc power sky rocket but the mc always turns out to be a emo edge lord who doesn’t even want to talk to women for 5 minutes. It’s not realistic, I just don’t understand anymore it’s like these authors have something against women or something. The mc won’t talk for 5 minutes to a women but would rather spend a whole month with another man with no rewards

Unfortunately the mc is more childish in this version instead of how you would expect a grown man in a kids body to react like the original. It always disappoint me as a man when I read another grown man being shy. I honestly don’t understand how any reader who’s been threw life can accept this unless your a weird, reclusive shut in. It’s almost the same thing in each Naruto fan fic, where the mc meets someone for the first time and all of a sudden feels the needs to protect them, it’s infuriating. When in reality or at least in my reality I would give that person advice about not taking not shit and keep it moving

I hope the character personality changes. I like the original more. But you have a grown man acting shy, I don’t care if he’s in a kid body.