Well the story is good. 5/5
I would like to recommend you to add supernatural or any magical realism stuff because without it they have a limited life span and you can't expect a happy ending because some of his lovers are older than him and will naturally die before him .
Hello author. I love your books but can you make a update shedule . You haven't updated both your novel The winner of life and Avatar system for a month.
Hope you update soon.