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FINALLY!!!! someone using a good power and actually being smart about it.I love that u did everything that a fan of one piece would do and did it perfectly. please continue and i hope u are as happy in life as u have made me happy with ur story.

THIS IS AWESOME!! the story is good, the grammar is good and the power used is good and balanced and especially the story style is funny and heartwarming. it feels like reading a Tale like red riding hood.

honestly it is really funny and hella entertaining too and although the title was kinda chinese fanfic style, the writing was good. please continue

honestly i expected the usual awful chinese stuff but the translation was good and the characters interacted normally and without the usual forcefulness. plus i love the power system and the way it works

honestly it's pretty good and the character development is awesome like we actually see him evolve and have a personality unlike most other stories and the changes done to canon are seamless and without being awkward