He is very fond of his father - ,some kids stupid, touyo must die and story long but good / He is very fond of his father - ,some kids stupid, dabi must die and story long but good /

All for one must be die

Dabi must be die

Dabi DİE, enough, only die

The best

Nezu villain? İ don't understand

Ah, I understand that Shoto wins because he is lucky, who knew he was such a professional at coin flipping?

tea is important

That's it, I need stories like this

Interesting

Your fanfiction good but very long

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I understand that you want to make money, you are publishing empty chapters as advertising work, which makes sense and the beginning of the book is good, but I did not read the rest.

Very good story and thank you for wrote this story

What is the need for impol down floor information? Etc... Book good but There is Not enough chapter, Book good but There is Not enough chapter

Perfect, I liked fist episode

You got bored because you went into too much detail, it would have remained a bit superficial but you would have finished the story but you couldn't do that, this is normal because writing is difficult. He fought the Yakuza too much, it was boring. Shin don't enough grown of age - point , and Let's say other things aren't too much of a problem.

Wow amazing

Your one piece fanfiction good. Writing a book is difficult, I also have a book called One Piece: Master... Good luck

Yes I know..😈