Hello brother, I personally feel your writing skills are good.I am happy to see some Indain writers writing novels on webnovels and expressing their thoughts. By the way I am also an Indian from UP, I have also started writing on webnovel My novel name " Galactic supremacy" Do check it out and express your opinion

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