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The story is packed with twists and questions, especially about the protagonist’s enemy. I really liked how the plot developed, it already has everything: humor, romance, mystery, a bit of frustration, and even some musical elements. From start to finish, the story was well done. I think it just needs a little more emotional depth in some scenes, and it would be even better. 😌
This is being interesting na :)
The characters have unique roles, unexpectedly revealing as you read through the story. You’ll have mixed feelings while diving into the author’s imagination. Nice work but you need to add more emotions on characters and improve the writing quality as well. The plot is good, so yes. Wishing you to write more.