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    REBIRTH THE WILLOW TREE AND CREATE THE STRONGEST TRIBE IN THE AGES 1 to 600 chapter

    Rebirth as a Willow Tree, building the strongest tribe in all of eternity
    Eastern · Stir-fried pumpkin with northern melon
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    Overall Score: 4.4/5 So, the dungeon master, what do you think of him? Probably just a kill-monger that kills adventurers to grow his dungeons more or even kill more people to spawn higher-level monsters. Well, this story is different, the dungeon master is still trying to defeat people, but through a diplomatic way which makes this story fun to read and the discovery phase of this story is awesome since it's not just "Muh exp to get stronger dungeon," nor, "Hurr Durr OP dungeon ability." Style Score: 4/5 My only problem with style is the small number of dialogue tags that sometimes can make it confusing. Otherwise, it's an easy-to-read experience from the get-go. 4 is the well-deserved score, it's not perfect, but it's close enough to be perfect. Grammar Score: 5/5 No complaints here. Grammatically, it's easy to read, even for a second speaker like me which sometimes becomes a problem with how translating advanced prose can be. Story Score: 5/5 Diplomatic is better than fighting. 5/5. Character Score: 5/5 The character, which is reincarnated to be a tentacle-ish monster, is actually really likable since he knows how to manipulate the dungeon even with his low level. My only complaint is his name, which is just 'DM'. However, my taste shouldn't bother you nor should remove a star from this review, so it's 5/5 for me.

    "How a Tentacle Monster Became the Lord of a Dungeon
    Fantasy · StrangerDanger51
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    11.000 M/h
    the Goblin Dungeon
    Fantasy · kskwk
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