the start is good, let's see how you're going to cook further

here are my thoughts after reviewing about 4 to 5 books which were female oriented these sure is catchy, addictive and a story where i guess female readers may read more and writing style is amazing, pace of the story is good too moreover i can definitely recommend this for female readers! keep it Author

the way it started, that i liked

thnx and i'm glad that you got some ideas from the story and ya i'll keep updating.

so here are my thought's the story from the very first chapter makes you curious to read the next chp length is perfect, character design is good.moreover the best thing i can say author says that he never read a webnovel but man your writing is awesome to much of my taste so yeah and i'm waiting for future chps.

nice one

nice start, catchy to make readers read next chp

so here are my thoughts the writing is good, the pace of the story is slow a bit but still it's interesting and ya it sure needs more chps to develop so i'm waiting for more

noice gives that black clover and solo-leveling vibe

well isn't these revealing the plot too much or is it only me who feel that?

so i read these book and here are my thoughts: The story depicts a lovable master deciples journey with action, drama, and good character descriptions. I loved the way story was written and can't wait for vol. 2. Moreover, I think these must get contracted, well anyways good luck and keep it up

that's what i can say lines to give chills if these were to be said as a dialogue, it would be awesome

How was he even talking then? Well, anyway.

these sure are addictive and make people go deeper.

Thank for your motivation Please keep supporting me in the future

glad to hear you like the story

Thank you, I'm glad you liked the story and I'll keep working on it Please keep supporting like these

Thank for your motivation and I'll definitely keep working on these Please keep supporting

glad you liked it

The story is addictive, and the thing that got my interest was that it gave off a demon slayer vibe and the lovely sibling bond I loved. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters. Keep it up!