EchoShion

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A programmer and wannabe writer.

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EchoShion2 years ago
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"a original a beginning as possible...."
Obviously, in order to fulfill the requirement of being interesting, the more unique your beginning is, the better. Still, please remember that you absolutely can't neglect the prerequisite of being interesting. You can't just try to make an original a beginning as possible; you must first ensure that your beginning is interesting to readers.
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Urban · WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL
EchoShion2 years ago
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Making me hungry.
Mulling over what he could do to stabilise his financial situation now that his lifestyle was improving, Tynan took out eggs, sausages, tomatoes, some mushrooms and a bundle of spinach. This was his special recipe that was invented during his university days when he was way too poor to afford anything else. The ingredients were cheap and it was easy to make it. He called it the "Brekkie Skillet" and it was highly praised by his roommates at that time. One full skillet could feed four hungry boys and he hoped Laura liked it too even if it has been a while since Tynan made it.
My Wife is an E-Ghost! (Shifted)
Urban · Destiny_Aitsuji
EchoShion2 years ago
Commented
With a ghost, every day isn't your day. Ehehe
From the crack of the door, Laura could see the manager cursing as he got up. He took a while to assess the damage done before kicking the broken chair aside. The grumpy manager shook his head. Today was simply not his day with the turn of unlucky incidents.
My Wife is an E-Ghost! (Shifted)
Urban · Destiny_Aitsuji
EchoShion2 years ago
Commented
These paragraphs are a bit too large in my opinion
Tynan didn't mind the rants. In fact, looking at Laura's angry expression made him feel cared for. The girl was adorable and he wished that she was real and not just an e-ghost or AI. Still, he made himself silently content and allowed the girl to rant a little more. Lunch break ended in forty more minutes but he was used to going without eating lunch. Instead of listening to depressing music in a corner, Tynan much preferred the company of his new friend. Also, it was entertaining to watch a poltergeist activate their powers for housework. If all ghosts were like Laura, everyone would want one. He didn't think that other G-phones had e-ghosts like Laura because he read the online reviews. The AI companion boasted by G-phone to help users was only as good as a dumbed-down version of the Google assistant.
My Wife is an E-Ghost! (Shifted)
Urban · Destiny_Aitsuji
EchoShion2 years ago
Commented
So funny!
Or was it a dream? The part-timer was positively confused with the sight that greeted him. The key unlocked the right door so why did he not recognise the studio apartment? Tynan slapped himself hard. Was it a dream? Nope. It hurt. This was reality without a doubt. What exactly happened? Surely the robbers who came to steal his wallet didn't think that his home was so filthy that they decided to clean up as a favour... right?
My Wife is an E-Ghost! (Shifted)
Urban · Destiny_Aitsuji
EchoShion2 years ago
Commented
That's the same reason i play games
"Sure, it beats playing games and chatting to faceless people online without knowing where they'd be tomorrow, right? Ok, tell me what your mission requires and I'll do my best to help you out. Talking to you is more fun than playing online games. I've grown bored of it two months ago but never had any real reason to not play it."
My Wife is an E-Ghost! (Shifted)
Urban · Destiny_Aitsuji
EchoShion2 years ago
Commented
I think it would be more sweet without the system...
Laura watched as the nerdy half-Asian pulled over a crumpled shirt from underneath his duvet to pull over his messy wet curls. He then ripped the towel off his waist and the girl turned red and shut her eyes while the man searched for his underwear and pants. How could he do this in front of a lady?! Had he no shame?! Then again, she couldn't quite blame him. How was she going to explain to him her mission to be able to regain her body? According to the system, she had to complete missions given by the system in the Task menu. After completing tasks successfully, Laura can exchange the soul points for a reward in the Shop.
My Wife is an E-Ghost! (Shifted)
Urban · Destiny_Aitsuji
EchoShion2 years ago
Commented
There's an incredible amount of elements that can be borrowed as reference from any novel. From the story's setting, to how the novel describes its characters, the author's style, and so on can all be used as references. Of course, you can only use such elements as references, not copy and plagiarize.
Book of Authors
Urban · WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL