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Don't pay attention to it, whether it's because of Gwen's personality or the protagonist's, them stopping or arguing in the middle of fights fits perfectly and is fun to watch.
I think that would be great, but they should slow it down, play with their identity as a mystery for the viewers. Instead of revealing it all at once, something like having them reveal their real first or last name, or maybe the neighborhood where they live, to save certain people or get the detonator. Things like that would drive the viewers crazy and make them start their own search.
Thanks a lot for the review. By the way, you're not the first person to tell me that the initial exposition chapter hurts the pacing a bit. Honestly, I wrote it because I felt it was necessary to explain a few things, but do you think I should remove it?
Me da curiosidad si la 'Misteriosa Superpotencia del Este' es real o es cosa china inventada como en Marvel. Alguien que haya visto la serie me lo puede confirmar?
What kind of logic is that? Kingpin has a family, Homelander has a family, Magneto has a family, that doesn't make them good people or unkillable for any reason. People who were literally tasked with ensuring he remained completely frozen like an object after being betrayed by the country that used him for the war, and they can't be killed because they have families?
Honestly, if I were you guys, I would have dropped it a long time ago. I don't understand how you can keep reading and complaining after so many chapters. I mean, the tutorial is already over, it's more than obvious what kind of story this is going to be. The truth is, I'm still here because I only know the basics of Harry Potter, so the world and the story seem pretty interesting to me. But from the comments I've read, it seems that's not really the fanfic author's credit.
Man, you weren't lying about 'very soon'. Thanks for the chapter.
So, there's no way he could broadcast from his own world in the future? I feel like it would make it more fun, since broadcasting to beings from another world literally doesn't affect the story at all, unlike broadcasting to the inhabitants of Marvel itself. Plus, depending on how the system works, it could help him earn more points.
No offense, okay? But I think you fell for some really obvious ragebait.
Estamos en EEUU, no creo que a la gente le interese tanto un año nuevo celebrado solo en China pero no importa, este comentario va a desaparecer en cuanto arreglen el capítulo igual. Gracias por el cap.