
I am the Biggus, I am THE Boi, and I... am... Chungus.
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Excellent chapter! I think you did this funeral chapter rather well by setting that somber tone. Along with the hokages speech. Also, I really like how you're portraying Kushina in this chapter, it makes it feel like she's not quite gotten past the kidnapping yet.
What a crazy chapter! At first I thought he was having some sort of lucid nightmare, or a genjutsu from the 3rd to show him what he's becoming. But this twist was something I never expected, Im loving it!
Damn, was not expecting for him to be removed. But it makes sense, he's a liability to those around him with his temper. I wonder if Danzo will use this as an opportunity to take him in.
Another wonderful chapter. I love how this character is being portrayed. Being the monster they treat him as. And the inner conflict earlier of him listening to Kushina but not understanding why, I love this!
Beautiful chapter, the tension was palpable! It really helps set precedent for how the mc carries himself. I wonder how this will affect his future.
maybe the meeting with B@d
that's assuming Danzo shows up to the deal