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please more chapters

the writing is fine, this is webnovel, we're all amateurs and start somewhere, the fanfic doesn't deserve so many bad reviews, i can read it perfectly, it isn't as bad as some other works on here, keep it up author

its great but the chapters feel a little short

good luck man, hope you write more

good fic so far, hopeful for more chapters

rasmodia always man, keep up the good work, thx for the chapter

hey man this is a good story, can i ask why you want people to give it one star? cause it at least deserves a 4.5 or something

thanks for the chapter

the fic is a good translation just a little fast paced

thx for the chapter