So sick of evil mcs i dont like goody goody mcs but evil mcs are worse more so trash like this one who will betray someone who loves u the best mcs are those who while not evil are also not selfless always helping people for no benifit

U dont actually think the killing curse can kill otsutsuki clan do u?Theyre basically gods compared to harry potter wizards the differnce in energy levels are to high unless a huge amount of magic in it.

I dont see how she could lose to him with the pact activated all she needs to do is shoot her own legs or better yet the hand or wrist so he cant weild his spear it would only take a split second for her servent to capitilize after hes killed or flees she can heal herself the only problem is her servent is weakened but is it to the point he cant even capitilize on his oppenent becomeing cripped?Even if he has phenex tear he he need a few seconds to use them wich should be enuf.

Lol i keep getting suprised by his smarts is this cunning from his past life?Something inherited from old hiruzen?I dont see how he could do such high level stuff like tricking danzo and kakazu and effectively run the village if thats not the case.

Such blatant bias he prob saw shes the one who attacked him first ide like it if he called him out about it but it would prob just cause him trouble unless snape confronts him about it

I dislike it when mcs are a afraid of female characters for no reason i never understood how its supposed to be funny even more so when they endure them hitting them

Dont know how to feel about the servitude part if im remembering right the dragon didnt even serve the dragonborn only aided them in battle in exchange for being brought out of his prison more of a deal than actual servitude and that was to a fellow dov as even if the dragonborn didnt kill a single dragon hell still instictivly recongized them as dragonborn i dont know if a dragon could serve anyone other than a fellow dov considering how prideful and dominating they are more so this one who refused to fully submit to the ideal master after thousends of years

The system is indeed weak but when the mc finally becomes strong its gonna be far more exciteing compared to if he had a powerful system that made him godlike in a few chapters like we have seen countless times

So far this mc seems really smart

Just casually molest someone why dont ya she should have been far more angry at that and him killing conners i can see already that this harems gonna be trash where the auther alters characters personalitys so they easily fall for him and ignore all the things that would normally prevent them from falling for him

Yep those are the genres i like aswell espeacely when the auther focuses on the childhood for a long stretch of time wich obviusly happens alot in harry potter its frustateing reading about children that dont have past life memory because children can be more impulsive brash overconfident and frankly dumb compared to someone with the past lifes memory as an adult its annoying seeing them make dumb mistakes

Be cool if this gives the mc some fame on a wider scale

Just realised he might be denying the dragonborn one of her greatest weopens a dragon summon plus a powerful shout he should have made sure she came along then agian considering how cunning the mc is sometimes he might want to take the opertunity for himself not like the dragonborn needs every advantage she can get to save the world*sarcasm*

This is a near exact copy of the last time he forged somwthing have some class auther tho i should expect nothing less considering i think this is a chinese translation they tend to repeat the same plots over and over such as the young master escalation plot offend/kill young master than his protecter then the elder of his clan then the patriarche than grand elder then ancestor then founder then move to new area where power level is higher and repeat

I thought a haram is a where a group of people are in a realationship with a single person?Meaning if they are all in a relationship with each other than it would be called something else.I did look it up but it doesnt seem to specify on this.

Bleach sword gods wives and concubines dont see how this negates what i said tho i didnt read your name wich would have clued me in on whats prob gonna be in ur story also cant load the page of ur story to check if its tagged harem for some reason prob to many viruses do to research

Not a harem anymore since theyre all in a relationship together

Didnt expect the mc to be that cruel playing with the hope of someone thats afraid to die young do to a curse for a minor benifit

Sigh~ as always i enjoy your storys i just wished u wouldnt put so much focus on snippets and isntead focused on your actual stories

Im glad its being explained most other auther overexagerate things without a proper explanation making it not make any sense if the teachers did this to other students it should naturally cause them problems of disloyalty and traumatised children but the bloodline is a pretty good explanation im guessing this version of harry potter is much more realistic in the sense that not all bad guys are crazy darklords there are probably many evil wizards and creatures power struggles between nations magical mafias on top of dangerous monsters this is the type of harry potter story i love where theres a bunch of world building expanding on the original story where we barely see the magical world in its entirely