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The story is still in its early stages, but I liked the direct writing style, free of unnecessary things. The story seems promising. I advise you to try it.

Thanks for the chapter

It is a wonderful novel. The chapters are rather many, but it is a very beautiful novel And its idea is good. I wish you luck In other novels.

Its value was previously five stars and today it is also a wonderful novel that has no hope from the author has very good ideas and does not imitate other novels blindly, he just needs some experience

The idea is old but the events are going well....................................................... ....................................................

The story is beautiful. The way of developing power is somewhat distinctive, but it's beautiful. The development of the story is also good, but there are some problems in the way of telling, but you are improving at that. There are some spelling mistakes

Nice, I hope you publish a whole bunch of episodes and I notice your content live in this way, maybe the story will end in a hundred chapters if you don't have another intention of course, and I apologize My mother tongue is not English, it might be unclear