Now I'm enjoying it and i hope he doesn't drop it

Saw the number of chapter so i wasn't tempted to read but when i gave it a try. It wasnt that bad. Its actually pretty good. And I see it going somewhere If it doesnt deviate

This is going somewhere

Even though this is the first chapter i kind of like it although the introduction leaves much to be desired good job and. Keep it up and i hope you improve upon it