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Adrianna_KB_200

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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2002mth
    Commented

    nicee😀

    Spheris's eyes tore open and a black mist poured out of his iris into the corridors of the bastion. The marshals gasped and Mage Anduris took frightened steps backwards, realizing what had just happened.
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    The Raven Thief
    Fantasy · Forteller
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2002mth
    Commented

    mmmm... intriguing 👌🔥🔥

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    The Raven Thief
    Fantasy · Forteller
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2002mth
    Replied to hezzabeth

    thanks ☺️

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    Unravel Aries
    Fantasy · Adrianna_KB_200
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2002mth
    Posted

    a gripping opening and also your vocabulary is impressive , the story is quite intriguing . you've got me hooked author

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    Lost in Pages
    Fantasy · Ailiseu
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2002mth
    Commented

    this a really captivating opening

    I tried to recall what had happened before I found myself in this strange place. I remembered reading a novel called <<Lost in Pages>> by the author 'Ailisue' before falling asleep. But for some reason, the details of the story eluded me, as if they were just fleeting dream.
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    Lost in Pages
    Fantasy · Ailiseu
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2002mth
    Posted

    "The opening is well-written, descriptive, and engaging. The protagonist seems interesting and relatable

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    The Raven Thief
    Fantasy · Forteller
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2002mth
    Replied to MAXandMILLS

    yeah

    Ch 2 A CHILD CREATED
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    Unravel Aries
    Fantasy · Adrianna_KB_200
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2002mth
    Posted

    nice opening , The first chapter has me hooked, and I'm excited to see where the story goes and I can't wait to read more!

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    Comeet Legacy
    Sci-fi · MAXandMILLS
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2003mth
    Posted

    it's full of vivid and evocative details , rooting for you author , I can't wait to see what you come up with next!" 😊

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    The Toothfairy Connection
    Fantasy · hezzabeth
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2003mth
    Posted

    Your writing is well-crafted and the story is compelling. The diction is excellent and the storyline is well-developed .you've a really strong opening this opening is very effective at setting the tone for the story and evoking strong emotions in the reader. Great job! 👏

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    The Harvester's Scion: A Tale of Death and Destiny
    Fantasy · umukoro_prosper
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2003mth
    Replied to Webstar3493

    thanks ☺️

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    Unravel Aries
    Fantasy · Adrianna_KB_200
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2003mth
    Posted

    the storyline seems Intriguing , nice writing style and dictions

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    Two worlds Apart:The Forbidden Love
    Fantasy · Webstar3493
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2003mth
    Commented

    nice quotes

    "You don't have to work hard to prove anything to anyone, as long as you are satisfied with what you have done, it alright"
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    Days of my Life
    Action · imposter_demon
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2003mth
    Posted

    love this storyline , its exactly my type of noveml

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    Days of my Life
    Action · imposter_demon
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2003mth
    Commented

    seems Intriguing....it leave us with a lot of questions .

    I woke up with pains all over my body, I stood up and looked around and noticed the destruction of the lab. What exactly happened here?But that wasn't my problem. I wanted to run but I fell down.I looked at my leg and noticed that it was broken, it was twisted to the left. I stood up and ran a little bit away from where I was standing, not minding my broken leg and started digging out the rumble, I kept digging hoping to find her.
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    Days of my Life
    Action · imposter_demon
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2003mth
    Commented

    nice beginning uhnit's rubble not rumble

    I woke up with pains all over my body, I stood up and looked around and noticed the destruction of the lab. What exactly happened here?But that wasn't my problem. I wanted to run but I fell down.I looked at my leg and noticed that it was broken, it was twisted to the left. I stood up and ran a little bit away from where I was standing, not minding my broken leg and started digging out the rumble, I kept digging hoping to find her.
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    Days of my Life
    Action · imposter_demon
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2004mth
    Replied to Xand3r

    thanks

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    Unravel Aries
    Fantasy · Adrianna_KB_200
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2004mth
    Commented

    The MC is really an interesting one and

    Ch 2 Unknown the God of Unknown
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    PYROSITES: My Heroines were truly Villainous
    Fantasy · NightGLE_WN
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2004mth
    Replied to UelUel

    alright

    Ch 1 THE DEFEAT
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    Unravel Aries
    Fantasy · Adrianna_KB_200
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  • Adrianna_KB_200
    Adrianna_KB_2004mth
    Posted

    tho I'm still in chapter 1 tho , good starting your story seems Intriguing to read

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    PYROSITES: My Heroines were truly Villainous
    Fantasy · NightGLE_WN
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