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_opalescent993mthCommentedI hate this man. I hate him so much. Does his obsessive greed never end?!
"You have to. You are too dangerous for me to have around and I want Fu Mingze to hate you, that can only happen if you leave him, if you break his heart. Little Lei surgery will be scheduled tomorrow and you also have until tomorrow to end things with Fu Mingze. If after Little Lei's surgery, you then decide to tell him the truth, then I don't mind returning her old heart to her." Yang Jiu warned coldly.- _opalescent993mthCommented
Li Chen is a naïve, entitled, fool & I do not like him.
Li Chen also didn't find anything wrong with his words and put the book in his hand. - _opalescent993mthCommented
That's fabricated, he would never. I hope Mingze investigates this and Jiu gets thrown in the deepest, darkest, recesses of the prison system.
The lawyer took a look at them and began "Old Master Sang had a lot of properties during his time of living. His total assets excluding the Sang Enterprise are worth over a hundred billion and his total liquidity is over fifty billion, all of that goes to his granddaughter Yang Meiyi while his company, Sang Enterprise goes to his son-in-law, Yang Jiu." - _opalescent993mthCommented
The line of dialogue should read, "Are you all ready for the reading of the will?"
The middle-aged man who was also Sang Xiu's lawyer looked at them and asked "How you all ready for the reading?" - _opalescent993mthCommented
I really hope Mingze gets to the bottom of this because these two do not deserve to get away with what they've done.
"Fu Mingze won't find out anything. You keep your shut, I will keep my shut and the only person who saw your car plate and thankfully not your face is now in the Philippines, so relax and stop drinking." Gu Zhen said in anger. He sighed and continued "Fu Mingze won't stop until there is someone to blame for Sang Xiu's accident and that's what will happen, before the weekends, we need someone to be the scapegoat." - _opalescent994mthCommented
Words cannot even begin to describe the fire with which I despise this man.
He has known Sang Xiu for years and there is no one she loves more than her daughter, she would lose her mind if anything happened to Meiyi but then again, perhaps Meiyi dying will be for the best, she was never supposed to be born anyway. - _opalescent994mthCommented
... I am unclear who the speaker of this line is.
"It is not my fault. It is you who made me like this." - _opalescent994mthCommented
All of them, everything. She contains multitudes. Much like any human being.
Then what was her real self? - _opalescent994mthPosted
Characters are woefully one dimensional. Interesting concept, poor execution. Has this author heard of the concept of levity? Genuinely wondering if author is aware "dark" does not mean characters should experience every possible traumatic occurrence known to man. While I am concerned to some degree about some of the characters' well-being I am not moved to continue any further than I have read (for reference that is 10% of the way through chapter 21) I do hope the author develops their style over time and improves upon it if this is a career they wish to pursue, this work in it's current state however is lacking, tragic (not in the way the author intended mind you) and atrocious. If one has to wait for chapter 100+ to experience a brief period in which traumatic events aren't the focal point of the novel then it is simply not worth the time and energy.
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Carelessness? Your staff is confining her to her courtyard like a prisoner and refusing to let her see her own child.
As for her carelessness towards Xi Ling, he will try his best make her a good mother. - _opalescent994mthCommented
Oh, because you r*ping her instead and entrapping her in the guilded cage of a political marriage was so much better right? 🤨
His heart was filled with different emotions. His heart was filled with rage towards Li Na and Li Caihong. They drugged Rui and even sent a man to rape her. What if he hadn't found her four years ago. That man.... He didn't even want to think ahead. - _opalescent994mthCommented
There is literally more than one "Miss Li," you imbecile.
"My Lord, the drug was purchased under the name of Miss Li. " - _opalescent994mthCommented
Pity? Pity is all you can manage?! After what you did to her?! How dare you!
Looking at the indifferent expression on Lord Xi's face, a trace of pity and sympathy for Li Rui aroused in their heart. - _opalescent994mthCommented
Xi Ying is a lying liar who lies and he vexes me.
" Girl, Don't Cry. I will be responsible for you from now. I, Xi Ying, would never treat you badly. " - _opalescent994mthCommented
You better not be thinking about doing what I think you're thinking about doing! 🤨
For the first time in his life, he panicked. He was a martial artist. Therefore, his body could survive through the outcomes of the drug. But looking at her thin and frail frame in his arms, he was sure that it would harm her to a great extent if she didn't get .....what was needed. - _opalescent994mthCommented
I don't think I have ever heard the term, "eyes like black grapes," before but something about it makes me feel warm inside. I think I like it.
Yet the thing which attracted him was not her soft, smooth pale white skin but her eyes. He didn't know why he couldn't look away from those beautiful and clean eyes which were like black grapes. - _opalescent994mthCommented
I think Howbeit should be Albeit.
Li Rui's maids, Li Hua and Li Mei were looking at her mistress with a very concerned face. Howbeit seeing no change in her expression their distressed hearts were assured. - _opalescent994mthCommented
I'm optimistic, I think I'm going to like this.
"As You Wish" - _opalescent994mthReplied to Tsugi_Yuni
You & me both. I still can't make sense of what it should say and I am usually good at reading through type errors.
Huo Fang the more when her after left and said "This is all Yang Meiyi fault, I won't let go just like that, she won't leave without a scratch." - _opalescent994mthPosted
Names of places and even background objects are misrepresented or shoddily fabricated. Character speech and description is choppy and it takes you out of the story. Translation work is poorly done. A few more editing passes would have made this readable but as is, it is a headache waiting to happen.