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Loved This chapter as well!! but I think that it is fast paced, slowing it down a little would be great.

Wow!!! this chapter is also great

Great chapter once again!!! stronger worlds one after another.

Again a great chapter, but if you just mention on how the mc levels up is would be great and you will have more room to write and explain about more things in the later chapter

Exploring different worlds at the same time is great. It would be great if mc's power is explained in more detail, as it is confusing on how he levelled up

Avatar getting OP is great and him levelling up is also great, but you can be more detailed about the leveling part. Everything else is good for the starting chapters

Characters, description of the world all are great. Good Job!!!

New avatars story line, great beginning, looking forward to seeing the next chapter... I have high hopes

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he is going because the most interesting character 😏