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Interesting concept in WH40K, hope we get more so I can review it more detailed. Update stability is not daily but adequate by webnovel standards.

The story shows great potential, power scalling is not ridiculous, pace is nice, its just that the time sometimes gets confusing but thats hardly anything significant.

6 minutes lol, I am so bored

Beautiful story and translation, too bad the ending is a bad rush, great job TL. Without you filtering, this story wouldn't have got the credit it deserve.

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The writing has potential to reach at least 100 chapters. Update stability is daily. Story development is stable, luckily with time skips between unimportant events, if I have to wait 3 chapters to wait between Tarkin's departure and arrive then I'd have left since filler chapters are frustrating. Luckily, that doesn't happen here. Character design is great, human for once in these star wars fics. The world background is basic star wars during the empire age, I cannot speak for any mistakes or inconsistencies with the star wars plot since I only remember the major details.

I came with update from the future Spoiler Alert: She did in-fact took it

The premise is good and more realistic than most of the ww2 fics in this platform, update is stable, pace is ok but if you just want full on warfare then its not the time yet, this is more of a by month pace of the story.

I've read to chapter 16, so far, I say this is one of the best COTE fics in the platform. The writing quality is simply superb, despite the poems and the speech pattern, everything is not too cringy, words can be repetitive but thats more of a limit in English vocabulary. Writing stability is well, updated regularly. The pace is neither too fast or too slow, it generally covers most of the note-worthy events in the story. The character is funny af, the addition of a translation helped the story avoid the repetition and add a creative slice to it which is one of the reasons for my high evaluation. The world background is like normal COTE fics, the background characters are up to their anime counterpart. Overall, I say this is an extremely rare fic on this platform and I think many who put power stones in the story would agree with me, if it continues like this, it can go well over 100 chapters without losing support.

Yeah but that was when he didn't have enough force to strike at the city. The city was protected by the second sons and the other mercenary companies. With their annihilation, the city lost most of that defense and the second son will even do internal sabotage from the inside so the advantages are now fully his.