King_Zeun
I am new here. A school students, I am studying for college entrance. Trying hard to complete this novel. Need some support. It means a lot to me. Thank youđđ»
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Looking at her sexy back and her white and untouched neck, I suddenly had a desire to give her a hickey at her neck- King_Zeun3mthCommented
Yes a good Tiddy ride..lol
"Ay~~ay your really are honeying up your mother, could it be that you need something?" - King_Zeun3mthCommented
The first chapter might be a bit confusing because it has chunks of various events which has already occurred. -Why? âFind it yourself in next few chaps... ;-)
Ch 1: Memory Loss. Who am I? - King_Zeun3mthReplied to Daoistwaterdrop
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Seeing the baby asleep a deep sigh escape Helena's mouth,"What have you done to my son Paul, you took him away from me but never revealed anything...and now you can't even say anything even if you want. Can't you see how much pain I am going through ?" she complained at the sky taking out her frustrations and sadness. A drop of tear rolled down her beautiful tanned face. - King_Zeun3mthReplied to DaoistDS64360
Yeah. I am just giving the overview of what actually happened. So when some of MC's later actions and character development could be understandable. Do you feel I need to change or anything ?If you feel please recommend , I shall give it a thought.[img=Why] Thank You for your comment.
Ch 1 Ch 1: Memory Loss. Who am I? - King_Zeun3mthReplied to MiizStudz
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The magic nectar bottle which Paul gave me,oh how embarrassing! This again brought back memories.I was very angry and embarrassed because he gave me that bottle with his essence in our academy days. That bastard scum got his ass beaten for that and wasn't able to sit for 3 days. Paul ,the strongest knight in his academy became the joke after getting beaten by the prodegy of mage academy. - King_Zeun3mthPosted
The Girl On the cover page of the book is Shreya Von Rosewood.Anyways The question is why would you read this book?-OP Mc But weak at first with lot of difficulties.-INCEST (Be honest with your self why you are here)Lol just kidding.-MC is neither a hero nor a villain . Or you may say he is both.-Trust issues; No love except his Hot and Sexy mom and mother(2nd mom)-Play boy. (Has a unique way to torture enemies. Steals Enemies wives/GF/Mother's heart and humiliates the enemies whiles the girls enjoy. {Note: MC does not Rape}- Whimsical and Psychopathic personality development {Sometimes kind and sometimes EXTREMELY cruel, beyond human imagination )-MC wants to be a Professor of.....? heh.. find out yourself.-Underworld Mafia........Yes many more are there. Are there other OP characters like MC? Yes..Now what ? No more spoilers. Just start reading the story remember its a SOL too.. so sometimes might be slow in progress.Okay..So thats all. Try commenting, I shall improve from my mistakes.Note : This is my first Story/Novel ever so plz forgive shortcomings if any. You need to Review and comment...okay.Thank you
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That's is for the end... MC's wifes you say...Not bad actually, although I dont' think MC likes to have wifes, but its too soon to say. Life is uncertain after all..Lets edit this part... Thanks any way...I should Lessen the description only suitable for 1st vol.
This paragraph has been deleted. - King_Zeun4mthReplied to SarcasticGODCh 4 Ch 4: Reborn and Intro
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