Heavenly_Path
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Heavenly_Patha month agoCommentedeach chapter is getting worse than the last. why do you need to drag things so far. there's barely any contents in each chapter. either increase the chapter size ,post more chapter per day , or make it fast paced.
- Heavenly_Path2 months agoCommented
mass release please
- Heavenly_Path2 months agoPosted
Pacing is great. No drawn out scenes. keep up the good work 👍
- Heavenly_Path3 months agoCommented
update!!!
- Heavenly_Path3 months agoPosted
A lot of inconsistency with canons. Grammatical, spelling and punctuation mistakes are rampant. But the idea is genuinely interesting. Author should up your game or compensate with more updates.
- Heavenly_Path3 months agoCommented
UPDATE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!
- Heavenly_Path3 months agoReplied to JaysanderEmberhowl
well, mc is not a transmigrator, means he has a maturity of that of a 17 y/o. And also he is modeled after Barney Stinson from HIMYM, so...
- Heavenly_Path3 months agoCommented
please try two chapters a day
- Heavenly_Path3 months agoPosted
Good read. I've enjoyed so far, hoping for a mass release.