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AOFD

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A simple person with complex thoughts…

2023-12-24 JoinedGlobal
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
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    When I read the first chapter I was hooked and I couldn't stop, it's a pity there are only 62 chapters because each and every chapter I read leaves me wanting for more. The writing style, the world building, the character development and the vivid description of the characters emotions makes this novel one of the best! I'm so glad I found it and chose to read it!

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    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    Sci-fi · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    Commented

    I knew someone would discover him! It was either Claire or Sam

    'Matt?'
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    Sci-fi · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    Replied to DaoistFCWsMR

    The book doesn't have to be perfect bruh

    Finally, we reached the university. I saw Tanya walk under the arch that had almost become the place of Claire's and my first kiss. But it never happened. I walked away.
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    Sci-fi · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    Commented

    That's how you get to people! You don't do anything when they actually expect you to, it makes them anxious and insecure and when they can't take it anymore they snap!😂

    Ch 30 Vantage Point
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    Sci-fi · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    Commented

    Title drop

    For a second, I was in free fall, flying through the darkness. My mind screamed, because for it, free fall was danger.
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    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    Sci-fi · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    Commented

    Friends…

    Ch 27 Chilled to the Bone
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    Sci-fi · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    Commented

    Yup, maths is the best

    Back then I was still going to school. I was obsessed with mathematics. I guess it was my escape: the world was muddy, irrational and hard, but math wasn't. It existed outside human concepts of good and evil, outside the dissonance of living. It was pure logic and yet allowed for creativity. That was two years after my Protector -- back then it was a morose man in his fifties -- advised me against winning any math competitions, so I had to be careful not to be too noticeable in class. Most of my education was done in the solitude of the school library.
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    Sci-fi · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    Commented

    Yes the novel is great. My favorite character is the mc, Matthew. Mickey is in his own way adorable, and uh what else? You're doing great and I like the novel very much!

    Ch 24 Tanya
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    Sci-fi · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    Commented

    I'd say the mystery is mystifying😂 it just hurts to see that it's only 62 chapters

    Ch 16 Cost of Labor
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    Sci-fi · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    Commented

    The story has been great so far. It's very captivating and your writing style is quite unique. There is some mystery surrounding matt which I can't wait to discover… can't wait to read what's next(⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)

    Ch 7 Blue-Eyed Man
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    Sci-fi · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    Commented

    I like the first chapter, it's very descriptive, it's quite long, but the story is interesting.

    Ch 1 1
    altalt
    MY CROCHETING LITTLE SISTER
    Others · inc_stcl_b
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    Commented

    By the way, is this chapter 1?

    LUCIANO
    altalt
    Night of a full moon
    Fantasy · Sara_Ani
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    Commented

    The story is good, although there are some typos, I believe you'll improve with time. As for the word count, the ideal number is 1500, but it's up to you though. So you do you, Good luck with your story!

    Ch 2 LUNAELLIAPE
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    Night of a full moon
    Fantasy · Sara_Ani
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    Commented

    Hey Author, I think you need to edit these parts away

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    altalt
    Night of a full moon
    Fantasy · Sara_Ani
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    Replied to NineHeavens

    Novels are life? Then read mine, it's a breath of fresh air…

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    Warlock of the Magus World
    Fantasy · The Plagiarist
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