The timeline was inconsistent so I changed everything. I wtopped using the months

I removed the months

what is the name of the original novel

in short,how well and how fast you move infront of obstacles

Well speed is just your speed and agility is how well you are able to manuever your way through obstacles with ease. like dodging and stuffs like that

wait how old is Sara again

Its the position he plays in football at the moment

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you said he had never been injured before but he was injured when he was 9 yrs old.

Nice story Joel but you have to make it a bit realistic. like This chapter per say. most fans would clap for young talents making their debuts not cheer and go nuts

Time skip is near.

Thanks for the feedback. Since his pace and spatial awareness are his biggest stats. I'm gonna make them his priority for Now.

Thank you for that. I will strive to make it better and I will go premium after a few chs

there will be a timeskip in the upcoming chapters. I want to improve my writing quality and also study the story line and characters so I can avoid the inconsistencies and improve the novel

I think its because I haven't gone premium yet. They sent me the contract but haven't signed it yet because I want to reach at least ch 40 before I sign it so you can enjoy it for free for a bit

Because of a timeline problem I changed it. sorry for the inconsistencies

Thanks for the feedback. I had the same thought as you so I will change it in the upcoming chapters. The reason I changed his birthday was I wanted him to participate in the u17 World Cup and get called up to the senior team after the time skip

He won't grow for a while until he's about 17

Sorry for the inconsistencies. I'm trying to make the timelines match up.

its not a fanfic