Arcee_prime

Clearly my boy, you do not know of Greek mythology at all 👍

Thought so. A lot of story’s can be similar at some points since some things are used a lot 🤷🏻‍♂️ don’t blame you for the miss up

I do it a lot early on in storys so the writer has lots of ideas. Better to have lots of ideas then none at all. Even if none get used with what I provide can be used for a whole new fanfic, I would be a writer myself. But as you can tell I ain’t good at it lol

Only took like 4 hours

Hi hello everyone reading this. Yes the characters coukd have more depth to them, but do remember that.. and I lost my train of thought lol. Anyways it’s a good story and with a bit more research the author could spice things up. Personally I think it’s been a amazing effort, not much is known about any of the Olympian’s personality’s and how they have changed along the years. I personally skipped all the Naruto stuff just cause it’s not my thing The author knows certain lores and story’s about the god have has included a lot of it and I hope to see more of what lore and past coming to bite them in the butt So far I’ve liked the emotions the main character has shown the character development has gone amazing and the author is improving I have said I’m dropping 3 votes/stones daily, and I haven’t done that unless there’s a chapter, we tend to see 3-5 chapters weekly so I’m happy with that. Where the story is atm I’d expect it to slow down so the author could plan write edit etc etc better. And I don’t know about how the quest for Percy Jackson are going to go since it’s basically been derailed, but to the author if your reading this you could use the quests as a baseline, I won’t drop all my ideas but for example you could have Percy go on the quest for the bolt and helm. With Grover Annabeth Talia. and Luke, you could have the main character be a guide watching them along the way, and the further the quests go along the more the mc will have out about what he’s family has been up to… like Medusa. He could step in mid fight and do this whole emotional roller coaster beating up Poseidon (again) and do put a curse? Idk if it works like that on Athena, something like having the consequences shoved down her throat. All the pain Medusa caused because of her. Her lack of wisdom in that moment and what not, The main character could free all the statues. Say the curse is similar like Tahlia. Breaking Medusas curse will free the people trapped in stone. And for compensation. She could be turned into a goddess. We all know some SA survivers tattoo Medusa’s head on them so she could be the goddess of survivors protection and past trauma guardian of the abused, or something along those lines, she should have her curse turned into a blessing. Say when she stares at those that have SAed someone they get paralysed and can see/feel all the pain they caused a bit like ghost rider, I’m not sure if the ancient laws will be in place like not interfering with their kids life. It could be changed so that they can’t interfere until camp. But they gotta send birthday presents and what not, let a demigod have a normal childhood for a long as they can right? If it does happen like that Medusa and and other like hestia Rhea and whatever other god or goddess is similar could have the right to interfere and save them if they are being mistreated. There’s lots of mini stories you can do along the way as the quests happen. Other examples that I won’t go into details like Medusa is the casino, the river Percy falls into, the theme park (either skip this or use it as a bit of a redemption arc for Aphrodite with it being ares attempt of “making up”) The river stynx is something I very much want to see fixed. And Ofc the main character fixing things between Demeter her daughter and hades or at least becoming aware it needs to be fixed These are all IDEAS The author doesn’t HAVE to use them but it’s IDEAS the author might appreciate and me being a Percy Jackson nerd I come with a lot of ideas 👍 Another thing author. If your intrested in expanding into other pantheons but not sure how (yet) there’s a thing called the Riordanverse. Basically 2 other book series interconnected to the Percy Jackson one, those pantheons being the Norse and Egyptian And if you want to add other stories LATER down the line AFTER KRONOS cause I’m guessing Gaia is being replaced by Tartarus Use Harry Potter witches and wizards became a thing when Hecate blessed mortals. That can be turned into something like a legacy the potential they had caused Zeus paranoia to flare up so Zeus demanded them killed. Hecate didn’t but sealed the magic, Zeus being a idiot thought she just erased the magic in them and thought it was more pleasing to take away their “toy” but since magic is part of the world it is something that will always be there just outta reach and and since the Greek gods moved with the west the seals couldn’t be maintained and since they didn’t have maintenance the seals eroded due to Hecates presence not being there to power the seals and when they broke they could fill up their sealed magic cores, circuits etc ewide that’s why muggles exiss and to so called blood purity thing is just older generations seals being broken first. But since Hecate is the goddess of magic no matter the distance the seals are sometimes put back into place hence squibs, and when Morgana and Merlin started Hecate could feel it and since she’s also the goddess of cross roads she could sneak back over but she was too late and Merlin and morgana died. Seeing that wizards and witches were being born again she adopted the 4 founders and blessed them so they had even larger cores and magic circuits Expanded and due to that they had their magical talents majorly enhanced now being demigods and on par with morgana and Merlin. Since pantheons move around a lot Merlin and morgana were only that strong because they had a mythological heritage either being celtic welsh or Christianity. But I’d use Celtic. Both half fae since Ireland and welsh mythology at that point had long since mixed a lot like the Roman’s and Greeks. That’s from a quick google saying fae are apart of both. Now I think after morgana and merlin fell witch hunts were starting up due to the christianity pathenion moving in the witch hunts began and the founders taking a note in Hecate of walking around being a teacher instead decided to build hogwarts to be a fortress and school and place of shelter and learning l, Hecate being a proud mother and wanting to help got the giant squid the mermaids a left over wondering centaur tribes to help protect it, and over time due to how small in numbers they were the mermaids and centaurs became a shell of who they once were mermaids falling due to inbreeding and being cut off from the Greek controlled area of the sea. So even if the pantheon ruling the sea in Ireland and England area tbey weren’t accepted the very sea was rejecting them and the centaurs cause of the wild not accepting them cause of due to the same reason. Their connection to the wild became maintained by strings and faith and they became deranged because it spoke back like a prophecy due to artemis being twins with Apollo, and due to Artemis being the goddess of the moon even if other pantheons being in charge the moon became something like a reflecter Artemis will always be connected to the moon so the feeling of the wild was felt in the moon it was like a blade slowly stabbing them in their sanity but they adapted and started feeling apollos connected through the sun reflecting on the moon. Hence forth their obsession with prophecy the planets and the forbidden forest belonging to them since the story of Hecate became corrupted and lost to something along the lines of a woman guiding them to a place that will be just theirs when they were meant to be guardians of hogwarts living in the forest Hecate will end up granting the 4 founders immortality secretly and all of them having their legacy secured new teachers and a headmaster for hogwarts and the hat to judge etc etc would seal themselves in hogwarts like sleeping beauty in a chamber nobody can access without the will of magic or Hecate granting access to wake them up they would feed their magic into hogwarts pushing hogwarts magical defences among other things to advance through the ages and so even if it’s damaged their magic would repair it. All 4 founders were amazing people but Slytherin would adopt someone that could speak to snakes like him and they would corrupt and twist hes name after watching a child burn at the stake after the child’s own parents called the church to report the child for being a child of Satan in all their shame and the adopted Child being to late to save him. While the adopted child wasn’t evil he just wanted to use the book that records children awakening their magic to locate and take every muggle child away and into hogwarts erasing their parents memory of them and seal the child memorys of the parents to avoid anything like that again the other children disagreed one thought it cruel to the children one thought it foolish and it would backstab them later one thought that while it could save the children from something like that and the church it would only become fear and hate towards people without magic and thought it was better they fight with honour towards cruelty and hope for a better tomorrow then to be erased and turned into a being of myth mothers tell to scare children, so the adopted child left hogwarts silently in shame knowing that they are right but having no other way to protect those children so he decided to attack the church’s, not the people but the influence the money, he stole from nobles supporting the witch hunts and cut the tongues of priests that thrived in the power and influence. Cause if tberes anything a slythein knows. Is that money and influence is power. He became robin hood he gave the money to the poor to build influence not using magic in the open where anyone could see. He spoke that someone should be innocent until proven guilty. He spoke that king Arthur the rightful king that everyone still had faith in once had a advisor and friend that was a wizard that helped them defeat the demon morgana and her army of people whos souls she twisted and enslaved that without merlin they would have lost and enslaved themselves. He spoke of the legenday sword king arthor used to fight the demon morgana that god guided him to the stone that the lady of the was said to have put there and become who he was meant to be.. though that last part was a lie. god didint guide him there. It was just by fate he ended there. Or to be clear that the sword was placed in a stone by the lady of the lake where only he would stumble apon it, and thaghat only he could pull it. What nobody knows not even the founders or the adopted son of slytherin that only the fates themselves and the lady. Was that the ladys true identity true name, was Cassandra the daughter of King Priam and Queen Hecuba of Troy, and famously cursed with the gift of true but unbelievable prophecy and that sword was her fathers the very will of her people their emotions condensed through generaions from the very moment troy fell every song and story told of troy and its people troy had faith had heros some heroic some tragic and when it comes to the divine faith can build power and among gods.. names have meaning and power. Once called the sword of troy the blade passed down from king to king the will of troy and its people now renamed Excalibur divine right power and leadership. A blace only a true can will wield. And theirs a back story for hogwarts and the wizard of world for ya if you want to expend the story I just spent 5 hours doing this cause I kept getting distracted 🤣 Even made up a whole back story for Cassandra ending the lady of the lake Went to 15000 words since shes can see the future. Ended up researching ALOT cause was gonna make the fates show her a vision of the last lf her peopel brother in law and nephew flewing to Italy to the form of rome to the roman empire have her show disgust towards what her legacys become just look up the things Octavian did the first Emperor of Rome. So yeah i got bored and made a whole back story for harry potter some changed lore and added connections to rome and greece, sue me. I got bored Maybe someone will take this idea maybe the author will. All up a good fanfic with amazing potential if planned right from here

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Nah. He’s freaking out cause he’s a child.

So bros a femboy now? 😂

That’s depending on position, what sort of sniper. Is it heavy ? Light? Loud? Have a suppressor. And enough supplies to last ages if sound attracts etc etc