nwov
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I actually didn’t catch that while writing. I apologize for the plot hole.
I can safely say that I am pleasantly surprised. Metaphors are used perfectly and it really shows the power dynamic between the MC and everyone else. The system is quite unique and detailed. Scenes are vivid and the writing is exquisite, so much so that you can easily picture the dark scenes indicated in the beginning. The dialogue is extremely well written and I don’t usually expect this type of quality from a web novel that updates this much. Excellent job and I can’t wait to see where this story goes!
I’m not sure where to start, really. The author’s style of writing is unique and it enhances the storytelling significantly as you are easily able to read into the emotions of the character. The plot itself is unsettling, but in a good way. Scenes are vivid in description and they weave into each other well. Only minor downside is that the chapters are a little short, but that is to be expected from a novel of this quality.
From what I’ve seen so far, this novel is a diamond in the rough. A pretty unique take on reincarnation that goes against the norm of going out unwillingly. The author is well-versed in words and every scene is extremely descriptive, and you can almost picture yourself in that situation. I enjoy the cute interactions between the MC and Elise and it feels very life-like. Overall, great start to a novel and I can’t wait to see how the plot progresses!
I deleted it so I can renter it in the WSA! It’ll be up again soon :)
Hello, the author here. Glad you enjoyed it!