Zacke

Aw shit nearing 30 chapters stored and I can probably afford the privilege. Go Ben go.

Stop making excuses for shitty writing. The only decent thing Auth put togheter was the apartment defense.

This is what I’m talking about Zent you said earlier in the story that Siv was plain mortal cause the Nidhog zapped her mothers powers so she birthed a plain mortal. Dosent affect the story much so no prob but watch these things.

That’s not even close to what I said.

Anybody would have done better. Well anybody except you.

You got me there Zent, I love your stories but you have a tendency to mix up your protags and on a few occasions the facts of your stories. I’m watching you. ;) <3

He is so against land whale culture but he can’t even enjoy a nice simple cup of coffee. At his core he is a lazy uncultured American.

Auth, shortbuss dosent even begin to describe the protegs at this point.

I mean, protag is supposed to be smart right? Why is he suddenly dropped on the head as a child? The characters aren’t behaving like humans. Love the story but this part is like it’s written by a kindergartner.

Author, bruh