Daki_3391

So far I'm giving this all 4 stars, we'll see how it goes. With your writing style, its a 50/50 chance if you'll keep up the momentum or become another boring and lifeless story with too many chapters. I did notice a few errors, which, how hard is it to proof read before you publish. But there weren't enough to hinder my enjoyment of the story. As an avid enemies to lover fan, I really appreciate the fact they truly dislike, even hate each other, immediately. There's no inkling of romance about to happen. I love the build up and I'm really hoping this story delivers. The main character is okay, she's rather dull in my opinion. Very generic but she has room to improve. Her fighting back during the assault scene made me really respect her. I hope she grows out of being such a timid character.