have to wait for the obvious villain monologue

Yeah, most stories do that, I'm not sure if I'll be able to have him fully experience it since I have no idea how he's supposed to act after being cheated on. I'll just let the characters write themselves and see what happens.

Author review here cause why not. In my opinion this story has a lot of dark themes overshadowed by humor and delusion. Perfect for everyone

Constitution

You want spoilers? It's not a big surprise really, just a small plot twist

Not exactly. He isn't going to be buying the bag but rather borrowing it for a price. He's not purchasing it, he's hiring it. He'll have to give it back later

Wait, so you don't want me to add a map? Just want to figure out the world structure from the places he travels? I'm not trying to be sarcastic or anything, people say I come off like that. Genuinely asking because I was planning on adding the map somewhere here for the readers but if y'all want to learn how the world works through the MC, that's fine too. Just needed to make sure.

Yeah. I didn't know how to properly start the novel off but any start is better than not starting at all. This was the best I could come up with at the time I started publishing this novel. 😅Still have a few things I have to straighten out and I can't redo the beginning like I want.