Victor_De_Paula

So good

Well, you only improve by writing, you can use it as an experiment and improve with time.

He has a lot to learn about Red Riot.

So good

So good

Espero que ele pinte o cabelo de vermelho

I found it quite realistic that a 5-year-old child isn't going to win a fight.

So good

So good

Dude, he needs to dye his hair red and find a Red Riot video to shape the rest of his character.