Will75

Its a nice story only problem is the mc starting from chapter 41 went from the name gavo to gaia

Interns

I mean that might not be possible in a short amount of time or at all he spent 10 years to design one for his very large castle and now he’s supposed to shrink it down so a hobbit can carry it. Also i imagine a lot of magical energy is need to power it. Lastly the most important reason it is said that it is bound to his soul so maybe not a good idea to keep a unimaginably corruptive ring that can corrupt mairs (minor gods) if they wear them in a room connected to your soul for long periods of time.

Hmm it said 3 military and 1 nobtle title upgrade. There’s probably rewards for 2 different achievement systems one for miltiary and the other is noble title So its probably 1 chest for each military position and 1 chest for the noble ones

To be honest I think thats just a name from a precedent like maybe a long time ago 12 supreme blades 21 great blades were forged and it became so famous that when ever a blade was forged it would be put in one of the tiers and called that (This is just a theory)

This is horrible and it in “what next” if this is whats next then this app really is crashing and burning. Plus the 1 chapter has no build up and immediately goes to a sob story Translation quality: 4/5 i dont think its a translation though Update stability ty: 1/5 it has 2 chapters 1 is locked Story development: 1/5 it seems to quick no build up Character design: 2/5 i cant tell since only 1 chapter World background: 3 its just the modern world nothing new

Oops messed up it said character design not development so scratch what i said about that

I really love the concept of this story. How the protagonist was a modern day person (of the pokemon world) who got sent back to ancient time before the formation of the pokemon alliance. Then from there we see him climb from being an ordinary commoner into a lord. Writing Quality: 5/5 the translation is very nice and none of the pokemon are translated incorrectly Update stability: 5/5 the updates are pretty much daily Story development: 4/5 I like how the story progressed from him being a commoner to the lord but i felt it was a bit quick in that start (i dont remember why its been a decent amount of time since i read the start) Character development: 5/5 to be honest idk how to rate this part because i dont think there was much of it the mc seem the same. But i dont think this type of story really needs it World background: 5/5 the world background is kinda already in place because the power system, creatures, etc are take from well pokemon. But since this is in the past the author did have to set that up. also the author made this before legends of arceus and most of it seems to match up

Its a pretty decent story and fun to read.

Writing Quality: 1 inconsistent translation Update Stability: 2 poor it says hasn’t been updated in months Story Development: 3 because I only read 20 chapters so I can not really say if it gets any development Character Design: 3 reason same as above World background: 4 because it was built on an already existing anime Overall I liked the concept as I’m a Pokémon fan but horrible execution due partly to the translation but besides it the story seemed to be a bit lacking.