TheGreatPanda
I am a corporate PANDA trying to reach Ascension by READING!!!!MUHAHAHAHA Just kidding (or not?)
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good idea thanks!
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Yeah thanks for pointing out
Jup!
Veeery long chapter but in a good way. Nice way to make an info dump without making it boring!
Ii completly agree!
I think it is effect(I may be wrong) but still good writing
Good cliffhanger
An exiting beginning, has good potential but it`s still a bit short. All in all great job for your first story!
It really sounds like a great idea but would it be ok if I first write a bit more?
Thanks!
Good chapter, explsins a lot!
Yo Thanks for the system that shows a bit how thestory will progress.
Thanks for the advice!
Great Potential, and nice first chapter!Woul make a incredible storie.