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Thresher10dCommentedSmut scenes can be nice every now and then, but what you are writing right now is perfect. I feel like the 40% smut would make you lose more readers than you would gain by just focusing on plot. Unlike a lot of stories on this platform, you don’t need smut to carry your readerbase, as your story and writing style is amazing. Go ahead and open up a Patreon, as I’m certain you’d get plenty of subscribers, and if you still want to write a lot of smut, you can have them as Patreon exclusive smut chapters. Obviously keep posting everything here, but just have patrons have access to a few chapters in advance and possibly some extra smut chapters. You’d make plently of money that’s for sure.
I wanted to include some of that 40% smut I promised (of which there hasn't been even 1% so far... it's all been plot, haha, damn), but I spent almost two hours trying to write a convincing scene without results that didn't seem horrible and make me cringe.- Thresher13dCommented"I need to talk to Mark"
- Thresher19dCommented"Our satellites picked this up passing by Mars an hour ago. It's fast, so it won't take long to arrive, ten minutes at most"
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The only Black Flash I know
And that's why the Black Flash existed. Once a part of the Speed Force gained individuality, getting rid of it was probably not pleasant. He didn't know how or why, but the Speed Force needed the Black Flash to personally harvest their lives and return the energy in them to its original source. - Thresher1mthCommentedThere is no way he was able to do anything inside.
- Thresher1mthReplied to John_Doe_7771- The gimmick of William's soul being able to attract nightmare creatures by smell will be henceforth retconned since it was a stupid fucking concept.
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Hear me out
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Dope. Now get rid of Nyx please!
1- The gimmick of William's soul being able to attract nightmare creatures by smell will be henceforth retconned since it was a stupid fucking concept. - Thresher1mthCommentedI walk up to him. "You're Megumi Fushiguro, right?"
- Thresher1mthCommentedIt also apparently has a trump card that can rival some of the strongest sorcerers, given that the user wants to kill themselves.
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Me to Choso and Toji
Goated: - Thresher1mthCommented
Unless Kai is with them. He’d be able to tell if Will is lying or not. For a reincarnator… Kai is scary.
It is going to be a stretch for them to fully believe the story but they couldn't prove that he didn't. Also, when their options were either a life saving memory and the possibility that someone was actually immortal, they would rather believe the latter rather than the former. - Thresher1mthCommented
Bro is 4 years old, that spear is gonna be way too long for him
I hesitated, my fingers brushing against the hilt of a sword. But when I gripped it, something felt off. The weight was wrong, the balance skewed. I returned it to its place and scanned the racks. My eyes settled on a spear, its shadowy tip catching my eye. Without thinking, I reached for it, and as my hand closed around the shaft, a surge of certainty washed over me. - Thresher1mthCommented
Isn’t he 4?
"Nothing Dad I was just wondering when you will let me fight in spars or capture the flag.I feel like I am ready and I want to improve." I said. - Thresher1mthCommented"What will you do with the baby?" Edward questioned me.
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As I sensed someone enter my chambers I quickly closed my book I had been reading on the latest slang the demigods seemed to be using and I turned to look at my visitor. - Thresher1mthReplied to John_Doe_777
I definitely won’t. I still don’t like Cassie even now over a thousand chapters later because of her actions back in the forgotten shore arc. The concept of a sunny copy that is obsessed with him is ridiculous, not to mention she’s a whole new reincarnator no one asked for. Rewrite Nyx out of the story or kill her off please
Anyways, that's it for this chapter I guess. - Thresher1mthCommented
If you got rid of Nyx this novel would be a 10/10
Anyways, that's it for this chapter I guess. - Thresher1mthCommented"Come on, I'll show you around," she said before beginning to pull at Sunny's hand and dragging him with her.
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First you introduce another reincarnator, then you make her a better sunny and have her obsessed with him. Jesus Christ author, what crack are you smoking? This novel was incredible until you introduced Nyx. If you wanted more interaction with the OG cohort you shouldn’t have killed off William in the first place.
As if anticipating that question, the dark-skinned girl immediately answered, "Oh, it's nothing amazing. My aspect allows me to use the shadow of any creature I defeat as my shadow puppet."