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What can I say other then, he figured it out.
hello author here, thanks for reading till now, but I have to ask. What do you mean by the Mc made stupid discussion, can you give me an example. Because I was writing it normally. (It can be because I just suck at this haha)
Might have, but the image in my head was a healer and Toji ain't a healer, he is a killer.
Thanks, for your critical criticism. I can't do anything about the story feeling generic other than applying "Soul games logic". For Momonga and Lemon not having much interaction, that's intentional, as I do plan to tell Lemon's story. And more interaction between them will come in the next arc after this one. TK for the review though.
Isn't this character from Dive to Blue?
Yep
Ah, now I look stupid for not checking which paragraph you were talking about. Well, my explanation still stands
Ok, I am a bit confused by your statement. If you are talking about the NPCs created by Lemon then it's cause he added additional knowledge as he knew the transfer might happen(he was just not sure) and for the regular ones I don't remember adding anything like that, but hey I wrote chap 1-4 like 1 and half years ago so you might be right.