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KimJaeIsHere4mthReplied to AlfirGive "Clap" Cube "Clap" A "Clap" PERSONALITY "CLAAAAAAAAP
I step up to the podium, adjusting the microphone to address the small gathering. "Good morning, fellow cadets, and to you too, Professor Snape," I announce, the reference to a certain fictional character causing a flicker of amusement within me. However, the sterile silence that follows reminds me of the altered reality of this world. In this version, there's no such thing as a Harry Potter movie, and the reference falls flat.- KimJaeIsHere4mthPosted
Hello, Kim Jae here! So I feel like the overall story is great and the characters are pretty good but ( This is Constructive criticism ) The storyline appears to be a bit disoriented and random buffs to random characters. Some plot events seem unpredictable and confusing, but the rest is fine. I enjoy your way of writing and hope you continue
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HOLD UP, WAIT A MINUTE
I walk out, incensed. - KimJaeIsHere4mthCommented
sword* not swor
From 'outside' Suho's perspective, Nayun presses her back on the giant embedded swor forcing the fight from a 2-on-1 to 1-on-1 this time against Hajin. Nayun prickly gazes at Hajin with full intent. She raises her sword and points it at Hajin. - KimJaeIsHere4mthReplied to Alfir
Aileen is at least S with just her stats, but she's S+ if you put in her experiences in battle.
"Get flung!" Aileen emotionally waves her hand, sending Shin Jonghak flying to the sides until he crashes on the rubbles of rocks and concrete from where I recall Dark Nayun has been shooting energy beams. - KimJaeIsHere4mthCommented
Insane, 100 views in a minute. Poggers everyone
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You Father Parker!
Webnovel has been 'shadowbanning' comments recently. This means that any comment that contains profanities in any form, will be automatically deleted. - KimJaeIsHere4mthCommented
Iath taketh the doth. no one else may take
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