Honestly there are much worse novels in higher positions. It's perfect? no, some things about the protagonist, especially at the beginning, made me want to strangle him, however the writing and the sense of the world were noticeably improving, thanks also to a basis that, if it's true, didn't invent anything new, and it's also true that it didn't it lacked everything it needed to have a lot of potential. I hope the author doesn't let himself be demoralized by idiots who comment without even reading the work itself. At least this is what I seem to have perceived. The material is good and honestly those who only know how to criticize will hardly ever achieve anything, especially if such criticism is not constructive.