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DaoistMRSTYx1hPostedOkay believe me guys, this book has got me hooked. let me guide y'all 🫴 1. Writing is in first person POV and the author relays the character's every feeling and expression which I'd rate a 100% 2. The Development of the story is just too good and keeps you wanting more. In these six chapters my expectations has never been cut short instead, the book keep soaring over my expectations. that's a 100% too. 3. The character design is just awesonme. I dunno you might think the character, Freddy is a tough guy and can be convinced, another can think he's a loser and can be convinced. i think he's a total douche bag 😂 who only wants to obsess over his fantasies and I'm convinced because the author portrays it so... that's a 100%. 4. updating stability is what I'd rate an 80% why because it's a chapter per day these six days and it's not satisfying. Author do better! so you can get a 100% at this too... 2 CHS per day will do 😁 5. The world background is just perfect.. the real world where he's deemed a failure at first and the game world where he's a Master! and also the TITAN System World where he simulates avatars. lastly the name is just perfect for the book... Well-done Author
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well, i love the sound of thtat
<We're hitting SandOffs Cafe tomorrow at 5 pm to battle it out in TITAN against some other team! How epic is that?> - DaoistMRSTYx1hCommented
the one with the supersonic hearing 😂😂😂😂
She was none other than Maisie, my neighbor with the 'supersonic' hearing. "What the heck are you doing here?!" I demanded, utterly arrogant in my confused state. - DaoistMRSTYx1hCommentedI was left there, hovering over the ogre's field while in the sky, going "What the f*** just happened?!"
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Really? it's now the system is giving such info? this system is not intelligent at all
[Hint: Actions affect your points, and frequent actions will increase the avatar's speed, etc.] - DaoistMRSTYx1dCommented
How about breaking this paragraph into two... it's bogus
This paragraph has been deleted. - DaoistMRSTYx1dCommentedCh 1 Back home?
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Yeah
Leo refused his desire to roll his eyes again, opting to close them instead. - DaoistMRSTYx1dCommented
"I demand an insurance" 😂😂😂
I hadn't been informed earlier that this was a literal do-or-die mission! I demand an insurance! - DaoistMRSTYx1dCommented
That's disappointing
I considered shouting, "Hey!" to startle the ogre and break the tension, but of course, the game had other plans. Instead of my voice, the game made me utter Shiksa's signature battle cry, "Ah-ha!" - DaoistMRSTYx2dCommented
This is absurd
[The TITAN System had been watching you for some time and finally decided to give you a chance to simulate Titans in the TITAN world] - DaoistMRSTYx2dCommented
No man, you shouldn't joke with food
As I walked into the kitchen, I suddenly realized I'd forgotten to heat up the food Mom had made the day before. And, to make matters worse, I'd left it out on the counter overnight. "Damn it!" I cursed under my breath. "How could I make such a careless mistake?" - DaoistMRSTYx2dCommented
😂😂😂😂
But then I remembered that he had been missing for two days and I probably shouldn't tell him to leave again. - DaoistMRSTYx2dCommented
Ehem!" I'm coughing awkwardly rn
I had gone outside wearing my shorts, thinking I'd just be out for a few minutes and come right back inside. I had no idea that Maisie would be out at the same time, or that she would see me in my current state of, well… undress, hah! It was a simple errand, in and out. No big deal. Or so I thought. - DaoistMRSTYx2dPosted
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