missing question mark here

delilah knows how op the emotive magic potential is 😭😭 interested to see what high level emotive magic looks like tho

there’s a “/“ here

“a” here should be “and”

so emotional… hit me right in the feels 😔😔

unnecessary “the” here in the last sentence

this sentence ends a bit weirdly, is the “get” meant to not be there or is the sentence missing a word?

good question! i’d like to know my self actually

“necromance” is missin an “r” here

typo here, “knigth” should be “knight”

hahahaha leon always takes julien’s comments too seriously, he’s quite coy in that aspect. hopefully they have some good bro bonding time 🙏🙏

kiera x julien 🙏🙏🙏🙏

“the to” should be “to the”

ohhh i see. hope the time expectations don’t pressure you too much, it’s okay to take longer on chapters or take breaks. we’ll be waiting 🫡

really love your emotional story telling approach throughout the novel entrail. this chapter was amazing!!! although, i feel like the story about the 10 inverted sky kids could have been fleshed out with more screen time, in order to feel more impactful, like the ending to the last acting arc was. nevertheless, this was still great. tftc entrail 🙏🙏🫡🫡

last word should be “fast” i think?

kiera x julien continues to brew 🙏🙏

peak peak peak peak peak