DeusMalum

hmmm.... it's actually good. There was a period where the story was starting to lose its spark, but it came back eventually. There are some important elements that I haven't understood, or have simply overlooked (Like what or who was that being that used to manipulate Kevin, was that lamb? or who put the curse on MC? or What was the actual ending that Emma knew? or Can MC rule Nexus and have access to the library and give equal representation to both gods and devil? or What is Nana's power?). I still liked this novel, though. Good luck with the future! And, last but not least, thanks for the no-harem bit. These days, that's like finding a needle in a haystack.

I really must say that you write one of the best, if not the best, synopsis, with a unique attraction all of its own. Your other novels are the same, they have very good synopsis. If you concentrate on a story and write with all you've got, you'll be a success in no time. You should really practise your skills, you have potential, dude!

nah, dude, I read it for free

Could have used stick and carrot method. Like He can meet her on alternate days and when he doesn't meet her, he studies. If marks still come less, punish them with Two days gap instead of one.

Dis-possible.

He is 19? Topper??? In college?? And doesn't know basic human reproduction. Yeah, BS

Another Story?

See.. Would have made much more sense if he was a bully.