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no problem you have been doing good job on both the fics

the story is really good highly recommend it 👍

whats his main goal does he want to be a director, producer or create a production house compared to big6

the translation is good but couldn't you change their name also

if he was going to use mangekyo then why display magnet release it could have been one of his ace

why is he having kids with useless weak women

bro its going good but finish the war already and show us some great development of India

Anyways great story

we need a big timeskip nowin which northern part has developed and no more lines likes north isn't developed yet are said

will you be stopping hiroshima Nagasaki bomb drops or let the history continue its course curious to know anyway good to see you back your story is doing great 👍