LazyHermitGal

*** This is a personal opnion, I hope I haven't offend you. *** . . . . . First off, love the cover photo. It's what pulls me in to read this story. Second, the chapters before 15/16 are like a draft instead of a proper chapter. The dialogues are not clearly indicated. There's no in-depth info. The later chapters are good tho. The plot, well for me, is going along a bit fast but at least there's a proper line of development there. The plot is interesting. Character design needs more info. What you have is like a basic description and I can't distinguish them from the rest. Like 'He's bigger than me' 'Black hair and handsome' I can only imagine the standard character on your cover photo. Lastly, the world settings is unique. Paired with the plot, it has the ability to be an amazing novel.

Your head is full of yellow!! 💛💛💛

4-star for the cover photo. I like the position of the characters in the photo but it's not art so im a bit bias.

hmmmm 🤔 intriguing. 🤔 5-star for the cover photo

*thumbs-up* for the cover photo. I like the world background, quite unique. The downside (for me) is that I got confused after reading it. I don't know why, maybe I read too much today. Overall, I'll recommend it, for the unique plot.

If I say that I'm waiting for more, Can I have more update!? 🥺

can you be BL? *wishful thinking* 🤩🤭

Prelude: I'm a BL lover. When I read this chapter, especially when checking out the new bod, I got the feeling of a shou in a gong's body. Sorry I just need to put that out so I won't think about it over and over.

I got addicted to this. It's like a dream of an Otaku came true. The scenes are realistic enough for it to be fantasy for some. It's just, the MC is too OP in luck. There's hardly an obstacle he can't overturn. Maybe that's the novel specialty. I haven't read the previlege chapters but I hope there's a situation where he loses (but not too badly) and makes a comeback. Coz as they say what doesn't kill you, makes you stronger. [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

kyaaaa!!! the new cover photo is soooo cooolll!!!! 😍😍😍