Well, that's just my personal preference. It doesn't really have a big impact, but because I like how my imagination guides me when writing, so I just put it in.

... Well, if you look at it from that perspective, maybe it's true, but I'm trying to make my main character seem innocent and easily fooled. You know, like the typical main character at the beginning of the story for character development. But don't worry, it'll change later!. Thanks for your opinion!

This is also partly due to the influence of my older sister. She tends to depict everything around the main character in great detail—I even forget what she's up to over there. Ah, remembering being held captive for hours to read her incredibly cringe and romance-filled stories and giving comments that didn't end with me getting beaten up still gives me shivers sometimes.

Thank you for your opinion and comments. Honestly, I tend to focus more on the details of the situation, atmosphere, and environment because I sometimes struggle with what to write. Essentially, I've already outlined how the story will unfold, so the challenge lies in filling it in and making it flow seamlessly. I still appreciate your honest feedback!

Sorry for the delay, I forgot to mention that I don't update on Sundays. Forgive me for my oversight; I'll be sure to post it next time! Thank you for your patience

Thanks for your advice! Maybe those are some mistakes that I missed and didn't manage to correct before I published. I'll keep that in mind and make sure to check it properly in the future!

Thank you very much for your opinion! Honestly, I feel anxious about my writing, because it focuses too much on explaining the environment and my characters' feelings rather than the action that readers usually want! Basically, I'm happy if you like my work! [img=Smitten]