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Calm_Wanderer1mthReplied to Chezebrelephaffe01Looks about right!
"You know, I can't believe how strong I became just by... Well, by having fun with you. I look like an Olympic athlete and I never even worked out." Shaking his head- Calm_Wanderer1mthReplied to Chezebrelephaffe01
He's got a suit, of course! I've put some AI generated images of both the helmet and the general design for the armor on patreon. It's for paid member only, though. I think he gets his suit around 9 or 10 chapters ahead.
Not waiting for their response, Ben went to his bedroom and swiftly went to his bedside table. Opening the drawer, he grabbed his modified gun, inspected it briefly, and put it in the holster on his side. Sighing in relief, the muscular man muttered with a small grin. "Much better! Despite my new strength, I really feel naked without a gun." - Calm_Wanderer1mthReplied to rbpCh 12 Chapter 12 - The Soul Bond Perk activating (Part 2) (R-18)
- Calm_Wanderer1mthCommentedAs one of his last main doubts about his perks was answered, a weight seemingly vanished from his shoulders, as he thought. 'I was right. I can use my perk to help May become as strong as me... I just need to find another way for Peter and the others... It shouldn't be too hard in this Universe, with all those crazy things happening... Maybe a kind of serum or some 'random' divinity... Midi-chlorians?...'
- Calm_Wanderer1mthReplied to Chezebrelephaffe01
This picture would be perfect for the MC of my Original Novel. It fits the image in my head.
Chuckling at the women's reaction, he asked. "How much taller?" "You went from 6ft to 6ft5." May replied. "That much?" He replied, shocked by the change. "Yes. And that's not all." May added. "You also look a lot younger. All your grey and white hair disappeared, your brown hair turned black and your irises went from brown to silver." She finished, a bit confused by the changes. - Calm_Wanderer1mthReplied to Chezebrelephaffe01
That's pretty much how I see Ben!
'I'll wait until I reach home and try a few things.' He decided inwardly, before exclaiming in his mind. 'God, I feel so great! Compared to the me of now, my previous body was... So weak...' He thought wryly. 'It's an improvement anyway, so I won't waste time thinking about it.' - Calm_Wanderer1mthReplied to Chezebrelephaffe01
That's Marvel for you! And that's also why it's so hard to write a logical fic in that universe. It's because there's no real power level system and characters who have a certain power in one universe, can be much weaker in an other. Sometimes it even changes in the same universe. Anyway, if I didn't implement my own cultivation system in it, I think I'd have either given up on the fic or botched it up.
Nodding slightly, Clint declared decisively. "I understand. Whatever you do though, don't push it too far. After all, with your current lifespan and his, you're not pressed for time." Nodding to his words, she replied. "I know. I'm not even certain of what I'm feeling, so I'm not stupid enough to go all in right now." After talking with Barton, she felt lighter, as if a burden was lifted, making her ponder as the two kept moving toward their next mission. - Calm_Wanderer1mthReplied to Chezebrelephaffe01
Physiology Perk for the win! Joke aside, I don't think I'll ever mention a precise measurement for it in my other novel. I'll allude to the fact that it's bigger than normal, but that's it. Simpler this way.
Being a bit annoyed, she looked at it with annoyance and that was when it hit her. "What the fuck's with this size?" A curse escaped her lips before Ben replied, chuckling. "It grew a bit." Moving her eyes toward his, she retorted with indignation. "A bit?! Are you fucking kidding me? You went from 8 inches to 10 inches in a matter of a week. And that's not a lot?! Do you want to cut me in half?!" - Calm_Wanderer1mthReplied to Chezebrelephaffe01
You'll quickly find out in the following chapters!
Unfortunately, it felt like the universe was against the idea, as during his last mission, he received many injuries, among which one damaged his reproductive organs. He could still 'do the deed', but he became infertile. The news almost broke him, and even a few years later, he still was not completely over it. - Calm_Wanderer2mthReplied to Silver_CallFeeling himself reaching an impasse, he let his mind wander for a while, trying to find a solution that kept eluding him. "If only it was as easy as those cultivation novels I used to enjoy in my last life. They only had to absorb some volatile energy by using a weird breathing pattern and they would become stron..." He muttered before an idea suddenly came to him, stopping him from uttering anything else out loud.
- Calm_Wanderer3mthReplied to DeathOfDeath
She's just explaining the general things to give them some perspectives and the rest they'll have to check on the computer.
Nodding his head, he claimed. "I will." After which May, who was supremely curious about the whole system asked. "Nat, you talked about Energy affinities. But there it says: 'Peak Earth Level'. What does that mean?" Nodding her head at the raven-haired woman, she replied. - Calm_Wanderer3mthReplied to Awesome22
Thanks for your advice, though.
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It happens, don't worry!
"I think I understand the gist of it, but could you explain the specifics." Ben asked the woman. Nodding with a knowing smile, she answered. "Sure. Well, the bloodline is self-explanatory, isn't it? Keep in mind that it doesn't mean that you don't have other bloodlines inside you, but simply that even if you do, their concentration is too low to matter in any way. Also, the device may be too weak to detect them." - Calm_Wanderer3mthReplied to
It's the only way for me to advertise. I understand that it may not be the most pleasant thing, but then again you're reading this novel for free and if you're not interested in that 'block of text', you can skip it. And let's be honest here, even if there was nothing, I doubt you'd have donated anything to my patreon.
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I put the tag cultivation on it.
"I think I understand the gist of it, but could you explain the specifics." Ben asked the woman. Nodding with a knowing smile, she answered. "Sure. Well, the bloodline is self-explanatory, isn't it? Keep in mind that it doesn't mean that you don't have other bloodlines inside you, but simply that even if you do, their concentration is too low to matter in any way. Also, the device may be too weak to detect them." - Calm_Wanderer3mthReplied to Dempis
Okay, what you said about the last names kept bothering me for the last few days. Since I like my novel to be void of 'plotholes' and incoherences, everything needs to at least makes sense. And the 'na' for the MC was clearly wrong. So, unlike what I told you previously, I changed the last names of the four of them to Mikhailov. In every chapter where it's mentioned. It may not be perfect, but that way I can use the Mikhail as the first ancestor of the family and not just Adeliya's father. Anyway, I hope it'll make more sense to you and to other Russian-speaking readers. Thanks again for the info!
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Oh! Like Odinson, son of Odin kind of thing? Thanks for the info! I won't change it though since I'm too far in, but I'll try to pay attention next time.
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France! And it's Demian Mikhailovna. I used a name generator, so it may not be entirely accurate for Russian speaking folks.
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No, I don't speak it, sorry. As someone from Europe, I just felt like using that place instead of the US for my novel. And since Eastern Europe is almost never used as a setting, I thought 'why not?'. Of course, that means that the places will be different from real life, although I'll probably use some real landmarks if I can.
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